Best descriptive paragraph in my story.
This Week we had to write a recount on something we did in the holidays. I chose to write about the snow that fell on Monday.
Mrc told us that this was our WOW .
Yellow Hat: WALT: Write descriptivly to make the reader be hooked in and get a picture in there head. I did this well because my writing is descriptive and I think I did really well.
Black Hat: WALT write our storys based on a five minute time period. I havent done this very well because my story on a whole day and it is very very long so I need to work on it. The reason why I need to make them shorter so that th reader dosnt get bored. 
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